it's a great photo, i really like it. concept is great. wonder how you managed to capture it. good choice of framing as well.
however, either you applied too much sharpening, or these lens have the worst bokeh i've ever seen. if it's sharpening, may i suggest you un-apply it on the background part that's supposed to be blurry? (just a mask with a gradient on that layer would probably suffice)